Maltese

EN
Tuesday, September the ninth, two thousand and eight.
It’s now night, and I’m writing a short message.
The message which I’m writing to you, it’s short, because I don’t speak much Maltese.
This is my first message in Maltese.

Are there any mistakes in my text?


MLT
It-Tlieta, disgha ta’settembru, elfejn u tmienja.
Issa lejl, u jien nikteb messagg qasir.
L-messagg li nikteblek, huwa qasir, ghaliex ma nitkellimx tajjeb bil-Malti.
Dan huwa l-ewwel il-messagg tieghi bil-Malti.

Hemm xi zballi fil-ktieb tieghi?


Sources:
BASICMALTESE GRAMMAR By Grazio Falzon
SURVIVAL MALTESE By Grazio Falzon
BASIC ENGLISH-MALTESE DICTIONARY Compiled by Grazio Falzon
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